Planetary Isolation

Planetary Isolation - Isa muling korning tula
by Bertong badtrip

dalawang bersyon ng teknik sa pagsusulat.

bersyon 1

Oh Please? . oh please!? ,
oh please!! count the shinny dots
glimmering from your sky
so you might hear?,
might hear!?, please hear!!!
this silent scream
and gain orion's eye

I hate? I hate!? I hate!!
the way your smile create
this morning dew
Because, because , becauseee!!!
That's the way I'am right now
Alive because of you

Oh dear, Oh my, oh dear!!!
i'll end it with all with a sigh
I Fear I fear
I fear, I'll just admit the truth
and watch your song go by

A dozen? , A thousand,!? A million!!
star surround you
and that you'll never be able to see
that you are the sole satelite around the head
of this 'Korni' planet that is me

bersyon 2

And so i hear it again
the call of the midnight sun
Its deadly rays and pale like hue
Thats paints a smile without a plan

i hate the way your sleepy smile
create this morning dew
cause that's the way I'am
right now
Alive because of you


please count the shinny dots
glimmering from your sky
so you might hear this
this silent scream
and gain orion's eye

as the night grow dull
i'll end it with all with a sigh
admit the truth
welcome sandman
and watch the truth go by

that a million star surround you
and that you'll never be able to see
that your the sole satellite
around the head
of this lonely planet that is me

yeh...